what d'you think? constructive criticism please. =)
Oh beautiful girl Why do you crave The attention of these men Who will soon rot in the grave?
The letter of your sister Fatimah, Do you not remember? How these men destroyed them, Placing them in their long awaited slumber.
Not that slumber of yours, Oh beautiful girl, But the haunted sleep of those who were crushed, On the cold bare floor, they curled.
Weeping over that chastity, Which for so long they protected, Yes, the same chastity you throw away, While they beat their brains out on the wall You sad girl, you still remain unaffected.
When will you awaken? For how long will your eyes pretend not to see? These men, they don’t care about you, You or your purity
Can’t you understand? That covering isn’t only, Saving yourself for your husband But saving you from burning in those flames, eternally.
